Soooo, there came a time where I felt my spark just fizzled....but I continued to read and write and not post...all I could write about was love....I was tired of love lol but hey this is what
I do and know so that is what it will be. Had to come to terms with this. S/O to Demetrice Prince, a writing inspiration that was in makings, sometimes it takes a lil push as he always says....
#Writerssupportwriters. He helped in the he says dialouge check out his page and book at DemetricePrinceWrites.net
She Says:
I take a brief intermission to figure out this vision. A masquerade filled ambition, no longer am I missing...out... on the best thing I never had, that past overexaggeration of what made me glad. Fogs cleared I can see again, too bad, looking back at what you thought you had. Replacing the irreplaceable you Corona over Le Miserables. Courageously shouting out impossible, but I think impeccable, unbreakable, mysteriously unboundable. I turn and walk away from unbroken bendables, promises, thoughtful transfers that never made it. I'm over it.....
He Says:
A new day is here and I am free...I'm hitting that reset button and saying goodbye to the way things used to be, and that life we used to live, this is actually quite refreshing...Well it was until I saw you the other day, now the silence is deafening. How can you be like this? Acting like I'm someone you don't miss? I treated you like a queen. Gave you my love unconditionally, satisfying your needs as if you were a damn fiend. Yet this is the thanks I get...you acting like my feelings ain't shit. I loved you then as I do now and that's all fact. I've finally found the truth, and baby I want you to come back....
She Says:
Oh now we dismissing the current and past facts at hand, when I needed you to be there, you said to me " I need to be a man." I trusted your words, followed my role, I let go of my control, let you be a man....told myself that it would be too bold. Now you say you love me but where was that when I was laying by your side, or in your bed, or those thoughts of me running across yo head and now you decide I shoulda been the one who led. So can you undo what was destined to happen, guess you weren't all that you thought you needed to be, O yea that invinceable "won't happen to me" attitude, I paid my dues, give me what is due, respect go on your way, dismissed I'm through with you....
He says:
You being through with with me? Surely that love is blind has made you see. I love you girl and there's no doubt. What you said is right, I have thrown the past and current facts out...The future is all that matters to me. I'm ready to be that man that you needed me to be. I did love you back then, I just didn't allow it to be shown, I didn't capitalize on those opportunities, and now all my successes appear to be blown. I'm trying to fight off destiny and reverse the already ill effects. Us walking way from this fiasco hand in hand is what is destined to happen next. This I am confident in, we need to stop this fighting and just let our undying love win.
She says:
I am putting an end to this untamed love, raw, uncut, never seen before throng, unfortunately this tale is coming to the finale, and it seems it will be left undone and unhappily. Let's close this chapter and never look back, we both know that this is over and that's a fact. Fighting unnatural forces, the odds are against us, I just want to move on knowing of the consequences that lies before us.....
I do and know so that is what it will be. Had to come to terms with this. S/O to Demetrice Prince, a writing inspiration that was in makings, sometimes it takes a lil push as he always says....
#Writerssupportwriters. He helped in the he says dialouge check out his page and book at DemetricePrinceWrites.net
She Says:
I take a brief intermission to figure out this vision. A masquerade filled ambition, no longer am I missing...out... on the best thing I never had, that past overexaggeration of what made me glad. Fogs cleared I can see again, too bad, looking back at what you thought you had. Replacing the irreplaceable you Corona over Le Miserables. Courageously shouting out impossible, but I think impeccable, unbreakable, mysteriously unboundable. I turn and walk away from unbroken bendables, promises, thoughtful transfers that never made it. I'm over it.....
He Says:
A new day is here and I am free...I'm hitting that reset button and saying goodbye to the way things used to be, and that life we used to live, this is actually quite refreshing...Well it was until I saw you the other day, now the silence is deafening. How can you be like this? Acting like I'm someone you don't miss? I treated you like a queen. Gave you my love unconditionally, satisfying your needs as if you were a damn fiend. Yet this is the thanks I get...you acting like my feelings ain't
She Says:
Oh now we dismissing the current and past facts at hand, when I needed you to be there, you said to me " I need to be a man." I trusted your words, followed my role, I let go of my control, let you be a man....told myself that it would be too bold. Now you say you love me but where was that when I was laying by your side, or in your bed, or those thoughts of me running across yo head and now you decide I shoulda been the one who led. So can you undo what was destined to happen, guess you weren't all that you thought you needed to be, O yea that invinceable "won't happen to me" attitude, I paid my dues, give me what is due, respect go on your way, dismissed I'm through with you....
He says:
You being through with with me? Surely that love is blind has made you see. I love you girl and there's no doubt. What you said is right, I have thrown the past and current facts out...The future is all that matters to me. I'm ready to be that man that you needed me to be. I did love you back then, I just didn't allow it to be shown, I didn't capitalize on those opportunities, and now all my successes appear to be blown. I'm trying to fight off destiny and reverse the already ill effects. Us walking way from this fiasco hand in hand is what is destined to happen next. This I am confident in, we need to stop this fighting and just let our undying love win.
She says:
I am putting an end to this untamed love, raw, uncut, never seen before throng, unfortunately this tale is coming to the finale, and it seems it will be left undone and unhappily. Let's close this chapter and never look back, we both know that this is over and that's a fact. Fighting unnatural forces, the odds are against us, I just want to move on knowing of the consequences that lies before us.....
Yo!!!!! This ish right here...This ish right here go hard! Not just saying that because I co-wrote and served as your writing inspiration to get that writing spark back. First off let me say that it was both an honor and a pleasure to work with you on this, thanks for choosing me. It was a lot of fun going back and forth with you. I think we encompassed what really goes on/goes through the mind of people during a separation. Its very accurate (not speaking from personal experiences) "I've been told" this is how it goes. And another great thing about this piece is that it can go either way...She could be saying the He part and vice versa. Hopefully this is only the beginning to other co-writing adventures!
ReplyDeleteYessss! Loved this one! We are about our business...writing at it's finest! Thanks!
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